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Like Lightening (Poem)

I've been getting more and more into just freestyle poetry :) Most of my poems have the same kinda orderly thing. (You'll see what I mean, as I post more.)
Like Lightening
You struck my heart
Electrified me to the core
Like Lightening
You broke me
Like glass I shattered
'S like I realized the shocking truth
Like Lightening
You shocked me
I felt so right
I felt so wrong
Yet in the end you were...
Like Lightening
You struck my heart
Electrified me to the core
Yet you did more than that
You let me go
But I never let you go
Even though you are gone
Like Lightening
You struck just that fast
You fascinate me
And I love that lightening
Like lightening
You shocked me
You are truly my
Lightening.
Reply to Addy🌲:
:) I want my poemsn to have a lasting effect on people.
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dvbdhbchb - 27 Nov 2023 02:21
Oml, I teared up a bit
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